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I'm taking a writing class and the assignment is always, "Write what you know." So I wrote an essay about Piano World. See below.



I belong to a chat-site on the Internet called Piano World, which has a subsection for Adult Beginners. People exchange tips on how to find a good teacher, what are the best pianos, and how to practice effectively. But the question that gets posted to Piano World over and over again is, “Can an adult learn to play the piano?” The answer to this question is obvious.

For me, taking piano lessons for the past two years has been 25 percent enjoyment, 75 percent frustration, which I consider a pretty good ratio. Some of the enjoyment comes from learning more about music. For example, I now have a greater appreciation for American composer Jerome Kern, who wrote the music for dozens of American musicals. But the main source of enjoyment comes from learning to play songs, or, as they are called in the music world, “pieces,” as in “What pieces are you working on?” Right now I’m working on three pieces--“Embraceable You,” by George and Ira Gershwin, ”Ondulation,” by Bela Bartok, and “Praeludium,” by a British composer named James Hook, whom my teacher refers to as “a minor Baroque composer.” Unfortunately for James Hook, he was born during the lifetime of Johan Sebastian Bach, so he is considered second rate by comparison, even though he was a musical genius who performed piano concertos publicly when he was only six-years-old.

Each of these pieces poses a different challenge, so my brain has to work on three different channels when I practice, which I do every morning at 7:00 a.m., when my husband is still asleep. He claims my practicing doesn’t wake him up; I choose to believe him. During the daytime when I practice, he puts on a pair of noise-cancelling headphones, which contributes to his unqualified support of my piano efforts.

“Embraceable You,” composed by the famous American Gershwin brothers, is the hardest for me to play, though it looks the easiest on paper. To begin with, it is what I consider a perfect song in terms of the words, written by older brother Ira Gershwin, and the music, written by younger brother George Gershwin. The song starts off with the simple two-word phrase, “Embrace me,” followed by one of the most seductive phrases in American popular song, “My sweet embraceable you,” which, with its pronoun twist, could have been written by artist M.C. Escher. The song continues from there, rhyming “embraceable” with “irreplaceable,” “tipsy” with “gypsy,” and “charms about you” with “arms about you.” It ends with the suggestive admonishment “Don’t be a naughty baby, come to Papa, come to Papa do,” which I’m guessing barely slipped by the censors in 1930, when the song premiered in a show called Girl Crazy.

The foundation of “Embraceable You,” though, is George Gershwin’s music, which opens with low, nonchalant tones and ascends to higher, more pleading tones as the song progresses. Dozens of singers have recorded this song; my favorite version is by Chet Baker. Though better known as a trumpet player, I like Chet Baker’s singing, which is languid and yet hopeful, as if he is exhausted by disappointment but still believes in love.

The fact that “Embraceable You” is a perfect song makes it intimidating to play. Any mistake mars perfection, like dragging a needle across a new LP. To do justice to the song requires a lightness of touch on the piano that I just don’t possess, particularly when it comes to playing chords, which require three or four fingers to play different notes simultaneously. “Your fingers should go ‘boing-boing-boing’ as if they are bouncing on a trampoline,” my teacher tells me. But mine go “plonk-plonk-plonk,” as if they were robots trying to dance "Les Sylphides." At one point I got so discouraged I stopped practicing “Embraceable You” altogether. This strategy, if adopted for the long term, is not a recipe for improvement.

The second piece I’m working on is “Ondulation,” by Hungarian composer Bela Bartok. Bartok was an early-20th-century modernist and a contemporary of artists such as Picasso and Matisse. In addition to composing and performing, he traveled the Hungarian countryside to record folk melodies, which he incorporated into his compositions. True to its title, “Ondulation” is a series of undulating, atonal scales that sound psychotically beautiful. I’ve just started learning this piece, so I’m in that 75 percent frustration zone where my brain and fingers conspire to make me play the wrong notes. What I’ve found is that every new piece takes me three or four weeks to learn, after which I can more or less play it from memory. If I don’t then play the piece every day, however, I quickly forget it. Currently, I am holding nine pieces in memory, but as new pieces come in, the older ones get pushed out, as if there were only nine chairs in the piano section of my brain.

The third piece, “Praeludium,” by British composer James Hook, born in the mid-1700s, has reached the 25 percent place of enjoyment for me—that window of time in which I’ve mastered the notes (mostly) but not gotten sick of them yet. Cheerful and bombastic, “Praeludium” is a classic march that makes me feel like a schoolgirl practicing my letters in a black-and-white composition book. I like playing “Praeludium” so much that I had a dream that I was playing it. In that dream I had a revelation. At my last lesson, my teacher told me that I needed to play the piece with more “direction.” At the time I wasn’t sure what that meant, but in my dream I realized what he was talking about. Playing the piano needs to be like walking or running—one needs to be slightly off balance to move the piece forward. I’ve been playing the piano as if I were marching in place, not going anywhere. I need, instead, to lean forward—mind, body, and soul, even if that results in more mistakes. “If you play with enthusiasm,” my teacher told me, “no one will notice the mistakes.”

That’s good advice for both inside and outside of the piano world.

That's great Emily!

Sam

Hi Emily, that was lovely to read, and I listen to “Embraceable You,” as I write these words. And after that, I will listen to Bartok and Hook. I have never liked Hook very much but after your words, I need to give him another chance.

Wonderful!

I can especially relate to the husband part. I had not yet started playing the piano when my husband and I got married. But he says it doesn't bother him, says he rarely notices it. He says if he's napping on the couch in the room next to the piano room (no doors to close, only always-open doorways), that he can sleep through my playing. And sometimes he even says it sounds good.

Like you, I choose to believe him!

Stupid question about Bartok's: is the name really Ondulation? I looked for it out of curiosity and could not find a hit.

Emily, very nice. I hope your writing teacher approves!

‘Ondulation” must be the French title. The English title is “Waves,” and the German is “Sich Wiegen.” I also love playing Bartok’s “Pentatonic Melody,” which is also crazy-gorgeous! Thanks for reading and replying!

Thank you. I found "Waves". Nice tune. Same applies to Pentatonic Melody.

Very interesting and well written essay. Also, an unusual topic for a post that I can't remember seeing before on PW.

Excellent writing, nicely engaging. You have a real talent.

Like you I am always practising pieces with very different styles.

I do wonder whether that is a good or bad approach for moving forward. But it is rare for me not to enjoy what I am learning, (most of the time).

Thoroughly enjoyable read! And wow, not sure I'd ever heard of Hook till now, so thanks!

Thanks, Emily —- well done 🙂 and I got to hear a Bartok piece that was new to me. All great!!

Great post thanks for sharing. I love that you call out the 25/75 ratio I can relate and it made me happy seeing that you call that a good ratio to have. I will have to take listen the composers you mention as I’m not familiar with it or I might have heard it and just don’t know proper names/titles.

Emily - I enjoyed your writing “piece” as much as anything I’ve read recently. Thanks for sharing your delightful writing!

PW friends--

Thanks for reading my PW essay and for the generous comments above! It was fun to write.

Thank you for that totally honest composition. You're writing certainly struck a chord with me.

I enjoyed the pieces you highlighted, especially Bartok. Thank you for sharing.

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Hi Emily,
I'm just reading your post now which I only discovered because someone reported a spammer who had "replied" to your post.

I really enjoyed your post, well written and an interesting perspective.

Personally I have a love/hate relation with the piano.

I absolutely love to play (and compose), I hate to practice (scales, exercises, site reading, etc.).
I've been playing for about 60 years now, so I can get around ok, but I often wonder how much better I might be if I'd taken lessons and practiced properly.

Anyway, thanks for your post, and keep practicing.

You went from the general in the first paragraph, spent time in the middle paragraphs on more specific discussion of composers and pieces, and nicely came back to the more general in your conclusion, while working in your own challenges and impressions. It all makes for a smooth and easy read. Nicely done!

An older thread, resurrected by a spammer, and Frank B, but no worries, cause it's a good read, like a TV re-run... I don't mind re-runs, if they're good.

As for myself, and why I play the piano, I play for pure fun and entertainment, that's true.

Not trying to win a talent contest, although I've performed in a few, and placed a time or two.

My piano playing is not all that good, but I like it when I play.

As a general rule, when I play the piano it usually makes my day.

And, although I can't play all that well, some other people seem to like it too.

I've achieved some notoriety, I suppose, on YouTube, by chance, and luck, and not because I was trying to.

Getting back to your quote, "enthusiasm" is the key, I do believe, at least for me.

Otherwise, I wouldn't have so much fun, when it comes to tickling the piano keys.

I play by ear, and instinct, based on keyboard logic and musical scheme.

I guess you could say music is scientific and mathematical, or so it seems.

But there is a logic and a flow to music, you know.

Twelve notes in all, 7 white and 5 black keys, as onward we go.

Oh, and technique, or how we depress the keys is a very important part.

If we get that part down-pat, then we don't have to be that smart.

Not sure how to end this, or where to go from here.

All I know is that I enjoy playing the piano, although I play by ear.

I'm in the minority, I know, but I still enjoy the Piano World site.

Just remember what your teacher told you, about "Enthusiasm", and you'll be alright.

Rick