https://vocaroo.com/i/s1fJKWdCg7wv

I'm creating a piece for the Greek God Ares.
I've finished it but it feels like something's missing especially in the ending bit.
Can't figure it out it's bugging me. I've played it so much I can't view the piece objectively anymore. Can anyone give me some input, anything is welcome, harsh criticism is best. I've recorded it on my computer and had to merge some parts together so it may sound a little distorted at times. It's very messy as well which is something I will fix when i record it live. I have a better video recorder but this is just a little layout of the piece.

Thanks in advance