Hello, vibavi, and welcome to the forum.
I assume you are an early beginner and do not have a teacher, since you ask us to assess your practice.
It sounds like you are doing well identifying which notes to play. Your performance had an identifiable melody that was easy to follow and anticipate.
Much of the nuance and technique that turns simple notes into beautiful music is missing. Don't worry, that is the natural state of beginners such as us. If you do not have a teacher, you will need to find some method of discovering and learning the finer techniques of playing beautifully.
Most of the fine technique that I have learned has come from:
1. Critical listening: when I hear something that I do not fully understand, I study it and try to reach an understanding of just what made the song sound the way it did, and then learn the technique so I can produce that sound again;
2. Discussions on this Forum: There are frequent, high quality discussions on this forum about technique and artistry, that can be very beneficial to us beginners;
3. Youtube can be very helpful if you are a critical viewer. There is much to learn from watching the best, and watching their performances with the advantages of recorded video can reveal a lot.
Good luck to you, and, welcome to the forum.