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#2117600 - 07/14/13 04:13 PM Original piano composition - Flight To The Moon  
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I finished a new composition today so I'd like to hear Your opinions about it. It's titled Flight To The Moon. Feel free to criticize and give me some tips if possible. Thanks!

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#2117940 - 07/15/13 08:18 AM Re: Original piano composition - Flight To The Moon [Re: PoetOfTheFall21]  
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Hi, PotF21!

Quite nice, in a "New Age-y" way. Logical, just enough change in progression and line to maintain interest for 2 minutes. And you have a nice sense of proportion, because any more than two minutes, you'd have to come up with idea "B".

Sort of a criticism, in a way -- I don't get any sense of "Flight to the Moon" in this composition; rather, I get a sense of earth-bound stasis, with all boundaries clearly established from the get-go. I would re-title it, if nothing else.

#2123710 - 07/27/13 07:43 AM Re: Original piano composition - Flight To The Moon [Re: PoetOfTheFall21]  
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Thanks for the feedback, glad you like it!:)

#2123713 - 07/27/13 07:53 AM Re: Original piano composition - Flight To The Moon [Re: PoetOfTheFall21]  
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Very nice Poet, thank you for sharing. A nice morning wake up. I found it thoughtful and delicate.
As for what it conjured in my imagination, that doesn't matter as for almost everyone it will be different but for me, It made me see elves and fairy's in a fantastical forest, glowing sprites in a fantasy forest revealed by moonlight. Thanks again!


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