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#1151723 - 01/22/09 06:56 PM "Silveria", my short piano composition.  
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Hello,

here I show my short piano composition - I just start work on it, so I will continue this slowly. Now I would like to ask your opinion about this piece. Thanks for comments :-)

Sincerely,
Sedonepix

http://www.badongo.com/audio/12919753

ps: English is not my original language, sorry for possible mistakes.

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#1151724 - 01/22/09 07:07 PM Re: "Silveria", my short piano composition.  
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I really really like the beginning, I was quite surprised with how much you could do with the octaves in the LH. Halfway through when it changes, I didn't care as much for the octaves staying in one place. ?? But maybe you could still use the RH melody, just move the LH around a bit so it doesn't sit on one octave quite as long at a stretch? Again, I really like the start of this!!!!!!!

#1151725 - 01/23/09 04:30 AM Re: "Silveria", my short piano composition.  
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Thank you for your comment, musiccr8r.
I will try to improve my LH.

And I will continue soon :-).

#1151726 - 01/27/09 04:17 AM Re: "Silveria", my short piano composition.  
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http://www.badongo.com/audio/13064955

the complete (?) "Silveria".

please, comment - it is very interesting for me to know what do you think about it.

thank you for hearing.

#1151727 - 01/27/09 04:45 AM Re: "Silveria", my short piano composition.  
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Very nice! I like the composition and the playing is excellent.


Joe Whitehead ------ Texas Trax
#1151728 - 01/27/09 04:47 AM Re: "Silveria", my short piano composition.  
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thank you, Joe!
for me it is very nice to hear it.

sedonepix.

#1151729 - 01/27/09 06:41 AM Re: "Silveria", my short piano composition.  
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I second musiccr8r. My favourite moment, actually, is 0:17-0:22. It's the way you played those repeated As that caught my attention. Good job smile


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#1151730 - 02/10/09 08:02 PM Re: "Silveria", my short piano composition.  
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sedonepix,

Just beautiful.

I just can't stand rich, big, but boring pieces (I have to say this). You can find tons of them.

This piece, though, is full of emotions, little story I wanna hear. Instead of closing the window after 20 sec. I just want more and more... You have to finish it and make it longer soon (did I say please? smile !

TTYS,
Miljan


"Strive for excellence, not perfection." H. JB
#1213788 - 06/08/09 05:19 AM Re: "Silveria", my short piano composition. [Re: Milosevic]  
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Hi all!

This my post is not about "Silveria", wich is still under work btw, but about my new composition "The wind in Utrecht": http://www.box.net/shared/3qz1drleyl (this is my black and white impression about visiting Utrecht). Thanks in advance.

sedonepix

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#1245791 - 08/08/09 02:13 PM Re: "Silveria", my short piano composition. [Re: sedonepix]  
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Hello.

Here is my new compositions.

"The grand in the rain" (or original name in my language is "Remembrance of what never happened" - hope, I do write it correct): http://www.box.net/shared/fmthfi5l3q

and

"Romance No.11": http://www.box.net/shared/xc6lnkll8y


Thanks for hearing.

#1245830 - 08/08/09 04:01 PM Re: "Silveria", my short piano composition. [Re: sedonepix II]  
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Yeah! definitely well composed. Very inspiring!

#1259171 - 08/30/09 05:30 PM Re: "Silveria", my short piano composition. [Re: Yaroslav Soltys]  
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Hi all!
"The one story": http://www.box.net/shared/jm4ut5ouqs

thanks for comments, if you will like to give some.


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